Show HN: Apparel for entrepreneurs
riskreward.co
riskreward.co
IMO it's better to strip the 'Entrepreneurs' part and leave maybe "Let's make shit happen". At least it sounds more cheering to me.
That would instantly make things less show-off and just generally motivating.
I could keep the 'apparel for entrepreneurs' within the brand, just not plaster it all over the front of the tees.
What specifically turned you off? The site branding, tee designs, the idea of apparel for entrepreneurs?
There is certainly some room to improve all this and narrow down the focus.
I've basically just printed stuff I want to wear (so I don't have to think about what I wear to the office for the next few years).
But I don't really feel successful business people should be bragging about how much better they are than anyone else on a T-Shirt.
Don't take it as a personal insult - my culture is probably different to yours. I'm not your target audience anyway.
Maybe the middle ground here would be making them less flashy and focused more to the aspiring founder.
Thank you for the feedback :).