I think the take home lesson here about writing more clearly has to do with presenting your text in a format that is easy to read. Thanks!
Thank you. The white text on a red background was killing me.
I found it easy to read, my eyes tend to wander when reading black text on white, maybe I have ADD or something, I found the huge white text on the dark red background easy to read, relaxing. Weird.
I found the colour okay, if a little distracting, but having to constantly scroll across slides was the most irritating bit.