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I for one, baulk at the term "intelligent" in this context. It's over-used, over-hyped, and invariably under-delivers.
However, assuming you actually have something useful and interesting, might I suggest that you either get a copy-editor or proof reader to help hone your text. Your copy is your display window - if people see "mistakes" then the message can get lost or ignored.
A good article with specific examples will go a long way. Generalities don't sell - a story that resonates with your intended market is what sells.
Finally, I can't respond to the call to
"Share your views on this product of mine."