Ask HN: Feedback on our landing page?
Hey HN,
Please help us to improve our landing page.
Link: https://staply.co
What do you think we can improve? Is it clear what we do?
- Remove the 'beta' tag [1]
- If this is a real LP, remove all navigation, your goal is to catch e-mail addresses here
- The headline and paragraph below are quite the same, use the paragraph to explain what I can do with it but keep it broad (plan your vacation, prepare a sales pitch, share recipes..)
- "Invite me" is a strange choice of CTA wording as you don' get invited but rather create a group. Why not "Create Group" or "Get started" alternatively can add some text below 'ready in 30 seconds' as you do below in the copy.
1: http://blog.sumall.com/journal/how-boost-sign-ups-website-ch...
I think better descriptions would be like these:
"Simply create chat groups to share files and discuss fastly[securely, easily....]" "No installation or credit card required to start. Create your group now and start chatting."
Screenshot is unnecessarily wide and magnifying effect is unnecessary. Change the screenshot with a chat session video(which you guys chat, send files each other). Make it .mp4, use HTML5 video tag and enable loop. Ta-da live screenshot!
Keep up the great work guys!
"Instead of shared folders create Staply groups where files and links are connected to the messages and not just thrown in. Share everything you want with anyone, file size and number of members is unlimited."
Could be smaller and easier to read.