Need feedback on Kickstarter landing page
themarkhor.com
themarkhor.com
-Headline #1 should tell me what you're doing. Don't assume I know what your deal is about. You could almost switch the first and second.
-CTA is way too far below the fold. I should immediately know what you want me to do. Donate? Subscribe? Drop it beneath "You are about to challange [sic] the status quo".
-Challenge, not "challange". Might want to look over your page for spelling and grammar...
This might be helpful: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r2CbbBLVaPk&feature=kp