And I'm sure the high frequency traders using it would chuckle to hear that they are "academics".
In particular, the cynical part of my mind wonders if it's simply because you can't read the code, and because of that haven't really bothered to follow the argument. I'm sure you must have deeper reasons that that, and I, for one, would appreciate an explanation of your reasoning.
If you're going to talk about the power of a language you have to allow the use of language that talks about that power. To talk about what you can do in Haskell beyond toy problems you need to allow people to use more than just toy language.
If readers aren't willing to do any work, its tough to help them learn anything new.
https://github.com/scalaz/scalaz/blob/scalaz-seven/core/src/...
Do they differ in some drastic way? (Note: I'm not super familiar with the Haskell version.)