This was my YC idea, what do you think?
smoothstart.com
smoothstart.com
Otherwise, the layout looks good. Some of your marketing text reads a little funny//choppy. You might want to re-read what you wrote and fine-tune.
And nitpicking: I don't like how the word "it" is on its own line in the quote on your front page.
It's also not clear to me what this product actually does. That may be because I don't have a background in marketing and don't know the jargon very well, but it might also be that your content reads like marketing fluff. In 150 words or fewer, what does this service do?
As for what it does, on the homepage: Generate, Manage & Track New Leads. All in one place. That's 9 words and one symbol. This is a sales tool, you labeling it as something that's related to marketing makes it clear you're not part of the demographics.
for example, maybe make the screenshots more legible so i could quickly get a feel for what specifically the thing does (ok, the 'create custom landing pages' and forms is clear enough, but the rest of the description is a lot fuzzier) and how i can use it.
the site itself looks gorgeous, though -- good luck!
I would take what everyone on here says with a grain of salt because i'm guessing most of us haven't used a CRM app.