Ask HN: Project Feedback - equipping written stories with an awareness.

Hi HN,

I made this webpage-story and was looking for feedback.

http://inthehandsofothers.com

It reads similar to a choose-your-own-adventure, but there is more to it than that. It is supposed to be about improving upon the book medium by combining a written story with computing/music/etc. I haven't got much support outside of people I directly know, so I was wondering if you could tell me what you think, and if you like the idea.