The problem is not the content of any text. Btw, yours is good, but actually not for me, not because you are any bad, but because my brain is this way.
Knowledge don't magically jump into the brain of people.
The most important part about knowledge is not its raw packed informative formalism but the teaching, or letting enough leisure time for people to study by themselves. It is the art of letting people build their own intuitive understanding. No computer, no books, no things can replace a good teacher, or a a good book that suits you.
That is why we need to disagree ;) dialog, and then agree again. Because, maybe dialog is a way of learning.