Show HN: Firesub – Reusable checklists for teams [MVP]
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Typically, MVP implies a product that's ready to be use. This appears to be more of a landing page teaser.
Regardless, looks like a cool service, and congrats on your progress thus far!
That being said, thanks for your encuragement, it helps! =)
Hopefully no one is feling tricked by the title, if so, I'm sorry and beg your pardon.
In terms of feedback, well I tried to sign up so I guess that tells you I liked it a lot, can you elaborate on how far along it actually is? Are the various screenshots current development status or are they just mockups at the moment? Your blog only has one post and it just shows a photo of a laptop on this landing page. I'm not a big fan of the tagline, it seems really convoluted - reusable checklists for teams is much closer to what it should be I think. Also I spotted a small typo, "Create beautiful and simple checklists that is easy to maintain and...", is should be are. :)
You should put a sign up button under each of the package options too, and use your analytics to see where people sign up. But really, most importantly, your website tells me your product is ready to get started with, I tried and now I don't know where in the process of being built it is. I really suggest clearing it up. :)
The current screenshots are the current development, I'v linked to a vide I recorded today as a way to clear up a the idea and workflow used in the app [0].
I will certainly fix the blog, I have no excuses for not updating it. =)
About the tag line, I am using "Reusable checklists for teams" or do you mean on the that I should remove the second heading on the landing page?
The typo is fixed, thanks!
I'v corrected your suggestions, thanks!
I would say the opposite. You could easily do rapid experiments to validate the idea before investing any development time, figuring out why you are building the product, and how people would use it. It's the whole purpose of UX experimentation and idea validation before investing code time. Not that I'm saying you wasted time, but rapid experimentation, prototyping and storyboard mockups is the opposite of a lot of work, its rapid validation that can help you start off on the right foot. I recommend this video "creating a culture of rapid experimentation http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7-WLX8gc8WY"
The initial plan was to release a viedeo of the app, like Drew Houston did with Dropbox. But in my mind the video needed to be perfect, not showing any signs of bugs or misshaps, so I got a bit stuck with that. So instead I decided to go with a good landing page and screenshots insted. Thats way I thought it would be a lot of work in making a video demo.
Just a quick comment about the first heading: "Every team have recurrent tasks to perform" doesn't sound right to me. I'd probably put: "Every team has recurring tasks to perform" - or at least replace the 'have' with a 'has' :-)
I have change the heading. Now it has has in it. =)
I haven't added synchronisation yet as I'm not sure the return would be worth the time and I'm also concerned about conflict resolution and data loss.
The OP has a picture of a cockpit which would imply a safety critical environment. I would think long and hard before selling my app in that way especially for an online service.
[0] https://itunes.apple.com/app/fast-lists-checklists-for/id481...
When it comes to your valid concern about the safety of pilots using a always-online application I agree with you, that would not be very smart, but nowadays there is technical soulutions around this problem [0]. Alsow it is a hint to everyone who have read the book "The checklist manifesto" by Atul Gawande, I recomend it!
[0] http://diveintohtml5.info/offline.html
Edit: Sounded to harsh, not my intention.
Good luck and endurance!
Thanks for the feedback.
The very first prototype had a discovery feature where you could publish your own checklist under categories, much like the App store but within the app and for checklists. I decided early on that it would be a version 2 feature, because what good does it make to be able to easily find new checklists if completeing them is not "butter-smoth", another concern is of course that the "store" would be exceptionally empty in the beginning. But the featuer is still in the "future features"-list.
Thanks for the enguragement, it gives energy! =)
A little "easter egg" is the backgrounds that comes after the first image in the header. Everyone who have read "The Checklist Manifesto" will understand. =)
Hopfully you like the idea. I'm very happy to answer any feedback you guys have.
I feel that to do apps are all very lacking in this respect, the reusable aspect.