CoffeeStrap HN
boards.coffeestrap.com
boards.coffeestrap.com
WE'RE TESTING IT AT THE UNIVERSITY OF VENICE, AND WE'D LOVE NOW TO DO THIS ON HN AS WELL.
YOU THINK THAT'S A BAD IDEA, WHICH DOESN'T SOLVE A REAL PROBLEM? LET US KNOW WHY."
Your first paragraph is not informative at all. What if I don't know what Tinder is? You're suggesting that maybe your idea is bad (and we should tell you why) about 1/2 a screen before telling me what your idea actually is. How about putting that sentence "CoffeeStrap is a place..." right at the top?
p.s. I think your idea is great! But I need more help understanding what's going on :)
Definitely agree about the "YOU THINK THAT'S A BAD IDEA" language. Besides being negative, it puts words in people's mouths, which is very off-putting.
Your project sounds neat, though. Best of luck with it!
The HN-specific page reads like startup satire.
I like Duolingo's approach, but they don't have the languages I want available (except German).
Edit: Bummer. No Danish. :(
//Dane
Also, the grey on grey text (like for the "What is this?" header) could be improved, and while not a design issue, I would've liked to see a bit about why you called it CoffeeStrap - seems like a weird name for a service like this - brings to mind a Bootstrap tool for CoffeeScript - never would've expected it to be a language-learning tool.
2. Colour scheme is terrible: green, orange, grey, pale yellow, orange on dark blue, dark blue text with orange shadow, green text on black terminal style popups, black text on asphalt texture, light blue boxes with grey text and dark blue headers, dark red footer with coffee table.
3. Lack of distinction between what is uppercase and what is lowercase. (And in general, just don't do uppercase like that as it's hard to read.)
4. Long-winded copy.
5. "Let Us Know Why" takes me to a team page. On the bottom is what looks like a gigantic back button. Where does the so-called back button go? Not back to the page which I was before I can tell you that. If it's a call-to-action it should be clear what it does.
6. Weird branding in the copy: text that jumps in between trying to appear professional/startupy and wanting to share a beer with you.
7. I just found a whole new introduction page: http://boards.coffeestrap.com/#/welcome I am so confused why more than one exists?
For starters. Realistically they need to work with a designer and start focusing on simplicity.
1. Work on forms: they should be easy to distinguish from other "blocky" things around.
2. It took me like 2 minutes to find what your project is about. Improve your landing page.
3. Colour scheme is really messy. Pick 2 base colors and extend them using http://kuler.adobe.com
4. Choice of name - I believe that in hacker community CoffeeStrap really sounds like Bootstrap in CoffeeScript
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The site also tends to go into 404 redirect loops which eventually crash the tab. Not sure if that's related to the above. This is happening loading http://boards.coffeestrap.com/ in an incognito tab.Also, don't see Thai as a language. :(
So definitely yes, we want to repeat that for other Institutions as well.