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Not gonna lie...it's pretty bad. For starters, the call to action is off the page on the right. Unforgivable.

Since your design skills are limited, you might need to find someone to do it or at least look online for some templates.

Here's what you're up against: http://www.ex-pos.com http://www.averoinc.com http://euclidanalytics.com/product/qsr http://restaurantsciences.com/

This one might be within the range of your skills: http://www.tapastech.com/analytics

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Out of which perhaps only ex-pos gets it right when it comes to a landing page. Avero's headline is somewhat of a turn off ("Wait, what app? Why do I need this app?"), Euclid's page sounds like a MBA wrote it (Maximize your custom...done, I'm not reading that), and restaurantsciences comes off as way too much of a corporate braggard, no offense intended.

He was probably going off of Joel/Buffer's example landing page: http://blog.bufferapp.com/idea-to-paying-customers-in-7-week...

Swiping stuff you don't understand will land you in a world of pain.

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