Coincidentally, I recently built a similar service as a week-long project to solve the same problem for a client.
I tried idonethis, but found the interface confusing and the pricing prohibitive.
I tried idonethis, but found the interface confusing and the pricing prohibitive.
First - not a particularly important detail - but please do your site a favor and get rid of the very tacky rocket ship clip art. I don't know why every SaaS MVP decides to abuse that image.
Second, this: "Status reports suck. We make them suck less."
That's not a professional sales pitch. Unless you're trying to sell to college teenagers (who wouldn't buy the product to begin with), it comes across as almost a parody or joke.
Also, saying you make the focus and point of your product suck less, is an extraordinarily bad way to try to sell a customer. It's a sales pitch from a negative. Never do it.
I disagree on the tagline, though. I'm not saying that our product sucks less. I'm saying that it makes doing status reports suck less. You may prove me wrong in the long run, and I'd be happy to be wrong on this, but my initial instinct is to keep it the same.
Thanks though! And sorry to the idonethis team. I don't want to hijack your thread.
Thanks again ;)
It wouldn't hurt to add a signup button at the top of the page either.