Horrendously-written and incoherent rant. I didn't get anything out of that other than the fact that the author, for reasons unknown, really doesn't like iOS 7.
Tim stated quoting "Customer Sat rating is our number 1 priority". Well I'm a huge customer and my sat rating went from #mindblown to #deadirritated
So the fact that you don't get the article is strange to me, because you expressed the very essence of it in your comment above.
Instead i'd write it as: Thesis / Points that support it / Conclusion. Like, you know - the way writing is taught in school.