Jakob Nielsen: World's Best Headlines: BBC News
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It's a tax I can honestly say I don't mind paying!
It's also enforced in an incredibly harsh manner and we (the taxpayers) are actually footing the bill to send people to jail who get caught without a license and then can't afford to pay it (though an outrcy in the House of Lords massively reduced the number being imprisioned down from 200 to 20 (roughly) a year.
On the other hand, if it came up for debate and reform, certain political factions would basically kill the BBC, which I love.
Specifically, you can use all their services including the iPlayer as long as you don't use the iPlayer to watch a program as it's being broadcast.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/blogs/bbcinternet/2008/01/iplayer_does_...
I don't have a TV and I live in the UK and the licensing people are aware of this. I do have broadband at home. At first I thought I would watch TV via the iPlayer, but it turns out that I've watched a grand total of one program in the last four months.
They send you a letter asking you to pay and you send it back saying you don't have a TV. That's all I had to do.
They'll probably ask me again in a few years, I suppose.
They then sent me that letter again. I guess the first letter was meant to scare me into paying under the assumption that I had lied.
Then they sent me a letter saying that they would pop round at any time of their choosing and check up on me. They have not yet done so, and if they do they are not coming in. It's a private property and they'll have to get a search warrant (which means going to a magistrate) if they think I'm watching TV.
Our records show that no one living at your address has purchased anything from Foo Department Stores during the past year. Since 99.9% of the UK population buys at least one item each year from us, you must have stolen something from us.
To pay for the item you have stolen ... .
Otherwise we will have to come and search your house to discover what you have stolen from us.
Yours,
Foo Department Stores.
There was no way to tell them you didn't need a license.
The next step is [they say in the letter] that they send an enforcement officer to your address.
If they just had a general phone number or a "we don't have a TV" phone number they'd have saved themselves at least the cost of sending someone out to try and hassle us ... and I'm sure a lot of other people.
It's not my job to chase up their failure to provide contact details on a demand for money.
OT: We got a parking fine when I took my wife in to have our baby last week. The number to call to pay the fine is the wrong number ... gah! I'm just not sure if this is malevolence.
They are not neutral (which is impossible) so there are certain ideas that they promote in their reporting. And even people who are against those ideas are forced to pay for the promotion of those ideas.
So why is the BBC so good when most others are so bad? Maybe it's in the BBC's blood: The news
organization originated as a radio station, where word count is at a premium and you must communicate
clearly to immediately grab listeners. In a spoken medium, each word is gone as soon as it's
uttered, so convoluted exposition confuses even more than it does in print.
Ceefax (one of the few surviving videotext services) also helps instill conciseness in BBC's journalists.
Text on low-def televisions has horrible resolution and only allows for a minute word count (somewhat
like mobile). * Italy buries first quake victims
* Romania blamed over Moldova riots
* Ten arrested in UK anti-terrorism raids
* Villagers hurt in West Bank clash
* Mass Thai protest over leadership
* Iran accuses journalist of spying
2 of those are poor for one of the criteria given IMO.* West Bank clash, villagers hurt * UK anti-terrorism raids, ten arrested
These front-load the headlines better so that if you know you don't like "West Bank" articles you can skip the other ~20 characters and jump to the next line. I don't think they are less readable either.
I have to confess I lengthened a headline from "Spiders reanimated" to "Spider Nightmare: Spiders resurrected from the dead" the other day ( http://digg.com/general_sciences/Spider_Nightmare_Spiders_re... ).. it felt so dirty and multiply redundant, and didn't get me any Diggs as National Geographic pipped me by 14 minutes with the story.
Your rewrite does little more than remove the verbs, making the headlines less clear, in my opinion.
I wonder if the journalists who write the articles choose the headlines, or if the BBC has a `Headline Phraser' job.
But you are right that the awkwardness is mostly due to a lack of prepositions.