My only issue is that in the article, and in other writing on the subject, nobody is even contemplating the possibility that Mochizuki's work might be unreadable for reasons other than it being too brilliant to grasp.
I wanted to present an alternative possibility which seems to be disregarded at the moment in favor of the attractive "eccentric genius" narrative.
On the topic of Perelman - he did reject the Fields Medal. However, he did give a series of talks at MIT, Princeton and other places a year after publishing his proof.