Get Satisfaction: Help us review a new page design
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I know that your business plan is based on getting companies to pay you to become their support system, but it would be nice if you didn't try to shape your words to pressure them in that direction. You have no connection to the company. You are unofficial. That's the truth. It's a small change, but a very meaningful one. No one likes the implication that they're avoiding something.
Get Satisfaction is not yet responding to this criticism. ;-) Yeah, it feels pretty crappy. For all I know, you haven't even read this or know it exists! Yet, I'm implying that you're just ignoring it because you don't want to be open. It might not sound like a big deal, but it's a huge change in how people see the companies represented on your site. If you really want to be a good steward, don't be playful with your words - be honest. I'm not saying you're intentionally doing this, just that if you want companies to take you seriously and trust you as a support mechanism, saying that you're unofficial will get them on your side more than saying they aren't participating.
You are and they are.
And BTW, their success probably depends on the misleading wording, at least initially. If it were done as you say from the very beginning, they would probably have much less traffic now.
The art of building a successful Web 2.0 company seems to do whatever is required always staying a hair's width away from getting sued. Threats of a lawsuit are great for publicity just as long as they don't materialize into litigation.
It's just unfortunate, because they could easily be just as successful via a more honest strategy. Costumers need however much support they can get, official or not. Many times I prefer official forums for support, because I get faster response.
I guess greed gets the best of us. But it does make more money. At what cost though.
Minor point: they're not here. Tell them that in their comments. :)
2) I can imagine their reluctance to visit here after the tone of the prior discussions on this topic.
3) There is no centralized comment section for the web. Not Slashdot, not Reddit, not here. They asked for comments on their site, not "please talk about this somewhere on the web".
From my outside view, it seems like you are trying to be everything to two very distinct entities - organizations and their customers. It seems you are trying to insert yourselves in between this relationship, even if one party isn't interested. I think this is the failure point.
It seems in my mind that the real customer here is the organization, since they are the ones paying for the service. You act - intentionally or not - as an advocate for the customer. Everything you do seems to be aligned with goading the organization into giving you money. It is very off putting from their perspective, which in the long run will probably end up hurting you.
If you want to be a voice for consumers, be that. If you want to provide a service to organizations, do that. Don't attempt to insert yourself into an already existing relationship - regardless of how functional it is.
Also, "People-Powered Customer Support" doesn't really convey what they say it conveys. All customer support is people-powered. 'Community-Powered Customer Support' or 'Customer-Powered Support' would be more accurate.
And as others have suggested, "Get Satisfaction has no affiliation with X" is much better that 'X is not yet participating'
Your phrasing might be more logical, but the phrasing that the page currently has is the phrasing that sounds best to native speakers' ears.
The simples English words sometimes have the trickiest definitions.
I recall that "be" takes multiple pages of the Oxford English Dictionary.
With regard to "of", I think that definition #8 here
http://www.yourdictionary.com/of
"concerning; about; with reference to - 'think well of me'"
is the way it's being used.
I disagree. I ask a favor OF someone. I ask a question TO someone.
This is actually a very interesting question. You'd say "Cyberdyne Customers" is an indirect object.
I give Cyberdyne Customers a cookie. I give a cookie to Cyberdyne Customers. I ask Cyberdyne Customers a question. *I ask a question to Cyberdyne Customers.
Why is the last form incorrect? What rules apply here? If you're interested in questions like this, I can recommend Steven Pinker's "The Stuff of Thought" ( http://www.amazon.com/Stuff-Thought-Language-Window-Nature/d... )
"Christine, that's all I ask of you." - Andrew Lloyd Weber
"Nor would I ask of any fellow American in defense of his freedom that which I would not gladly give myself - my life before my liberty." - Manchurian Candidate
"And ask of you forgiveness; and so we’ll live," - Shakespeare (King Lear)
These classic lines have made their mark on our culture and/or the English language.
The notable exception to this is when "to" is used to show cause, i.e.
The student asked permission [in order] to go to the bathroom
The man asked a question [in order] to understand the answer
Not in English you don't.
"Most customer support communities on Get Satisfaction have some level of employee involvement (about three-quarters), but the rest are added and cultivated by customers."
OK. Just one point. This is kind of a meta-comment about how you are doing this.
The above, quoted from your solicitation for feedback, ambiguously mentions "employees" without clarifying whose employees they are. Employees of Get Satisfaction? Or employees of the company in question? I think I know the answer, but really it is ambiguous. To someone who hasn't read more about the back story, it is VERY ambiguous.
Ambiguity in the writing on your site seems to be a recurring theme. In fact, if I understand the back story correctly, a problem with ambiguity is one of the main reasons you did this new page design. Maybe you should try shuffling the writing team around a bit; they seem to be having trouble stepping outside of themselves to see the prose as others would see it.
* I don't think the "X has Opted Out of this Community" and "X is not yet participating" states are both needed. Just labeling it as unofficial in both cases should be enough.
* The wording in the post a topic to the forum (#6) is strange sounding to me. Maybe "Ask X customers a question"