I'll go first. I've updated the ad here are the words.

Title: Always sell the hot items

Content: The most current list of best selling products on auction sites. Selling hot products easy

and you can see the updated ad here: http://devcomsystems.com.au/fb_ad2.png

I struggle to think "would I click on this?" because I never click on any ads!

Again, any help would be MOST appreciated!