What's the target age for this? The imagery is very juvenile, and although can be thought of as nostalgic, comes off as either condescending or not serious.

Some blunt feedback: the premise is there, sure, but nothing about this gives me any inclination that there is something worth purchasing here. There's no explanation of how you "build your best future," what that entails, etc.

A few misc. thoughts:

--Future self sounds very "Matrix-y" and is overwhelming --The imagery is just too young --The "pay what you want to" model is interesting, but the foundation is providing excessive value. You have to make the case first that this is worth it... --There is a bug where if you scroll past the "add name" shot you can't go back. So, I got stuck there and am not sure what actually happens.

The self-help market is big and there is opportunity, but you need to clarify the message about your "system" or whatever it is that's going to work. This market is made by building a brand around your advice -- think about Atkins Diet, Tae Bo, 7 Habits -- and while the web component and "exploration" components are interesting, there's nothing that sticks or stands out, especially to an adult.