I'm putting the finishing touches on a new painting app for iOS (and probably ported to Android soon) and am about ready to start pushing this out, but I want some people with experience to critique it. Basically, what will drive conversions? I'm going to tweak it when it launches to have that necessary info as well. I've used Bootstrap because I'm not too fluent in web standards/design any more.
What're your thoughts?
Here's my suggestion: http://d.pr/i/5ajG
Tulip "Just swipe to start painting" "Free, and easy to use"
iOS meets Finger Painting
The best part is its price. No Monet necessary.
The mobile version of the page is very similar, although slightly optimized below the scroll, in general it has the same problem for me.
That's why I came for some critique here. I want my website to match the quality of my app for once.
The bright bg-color in your logo is distracting me from actually reading the name of your app. The iPhone itself is really slick, though the fonts and used colors aren't. Perhaps you could use googlefonts? The text you use is nice, though could use some improvement. Maybe it sounds better on a video than it reads on screen. "Yes, it's that simple" is a bit cheesy nowadays. Also, as an app user I wouldn't understand what an SVG file is for editing on a desktop. (who uses a desktop anyways, you're even targeting iOS-users only?)
Your headline is great!
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