As someone whose inner (brain) chain of thought is messy, reading your prompt was a very pleasant experience. It might be dirty, it might not be polished, but reading this was like taking a dump of your thought, planting it on my brain, and letting me build upon it to understand your point.
I could not finish the output made by Claude. I tried, but having to translate back from "mouthy words" to "plain English" is tiresome.
I am not trying to say that I don't like well written words, a good book with carefully chosen words is a good way to spend an afternoon. But for LLMs, it feels very forced and not natural because it doesn't insert those words where it would make sense for a good author.