They/the LLM made sure to replace the em dashes with semicolons
Rae bought all the candy at the store - Milky Way, Reese's, M&Ms, everything - and set out for Kay's party.
That can't be rewritten as,
Rae bought all the candy at the store; Milky Way, Reese's, M&Ms, everything; and set out for Kay's party.
Semicolons set off independent clauses - what would otherwise be complete sentences. Em dashes create breaks in the flow of the sentence; commas are more similar.
There was an odd key to unlocking it sounding like a human. I spent like a month on this topic last year, and I randomly stumbled upon something that ended up massively improving generated tests.
It was a shot in the dark after failing so often. And then it suddenly sounded good.