This has that weird "AI written" sentence structure.
I try to learn writing and copywriting directly in english to avoid the awkward translation effect, but I focus more on the rythm, structure and content than the prasing itself
If you're sincere then I'm afraid you're being led on by the lazy.
When tasked with translating a document, unless instructed otherwise, the LLM does not inject its own cliched stories, narrative structures and assorted engagement tricks.
It's possible they're all lying. It's very unlikely that zero of them are lying, as I happen to be in a place where I get exposed to this, so I've seen it a lot. But I've seen it an awful lot for it all to be liars.
Unfortunately, I don't speak a foreign language fluently enough to test it myself. I have some I can kind of verify that the translation is literally accurate but I don't have any second language I could do a style translation for.
i wish the translation tool would tell me if it can't directly translate a word because of misspellings or abbreviations. i learned that i have to write in a very explicit straight forward way, with each sentence standing on its own to make sure i get sensible translations.
It's a shame that the models can't better preserve people's voices for this use case.
If you miss the message, one less person to compete with.