Both your points are reasonable. You've stated them clearly here, but your article comes across as too gushy (to me).
That said, it is your article, and the choice of tone is completely your decision.
My opinion is just that, opinion, from someone on the internet. Take it for what it is worth.
You say (quoting your article)
"In this article (and more to come (possibly)), I begin my attempt to catalog Mr. Hickey's unique viewpoint."
My (mild) criticism was that there is nothing unique or, in your words, "Hickeysian" (shudder) about any of this. Or if you did actually 'catalog Mr Hickey's unique viewpoint' I didn't see it (in the article).
That maybe a trivial point to you, but I believe it is valid criticism, especially when you make a very specific claim, as above. And hey fwiw, I didn't say that on your blog, only as a comment on HN.
Fwiw, I completely agree with the idea that Rich Hickey's talks are well worth listening to for all devs, whether newbies or not. He is a great speaker and clear thinker, and a great engineer.
Actually, I would like to see an article decoding Hickey's way of thinking.
Avoiding 'the gush' makes for stronger articles. Consider this feedback - a random comment on your blog post if you will (imo again, ymmv etc, as always, and that is as it should be). If it helps you create better articles in the future, that's great. If not, that is fine too.
But yes, incense and chanting at the shrine is one way to do it ;). Go for it, and more power to you.