Can you try and tune your Claude or whatever LLM you're using for your text to phrase things in plain English. Way less use of antithesis, at least. You can probably find a skill for it, if not get an LLM to write your own.
Yes, there are lots of obvious LLM tells that don't add value, like "the math has to be empirical, not aspirational", use of colorful technical language like "knobs" and "wiring", etc. It distracts from the content.
fair points. will take this into account in the next post.