It would be nice if you eliminated a few lines -

"You suddenly realise that you need to find a web hosting service to host your super cool site..."

"Obviously you need a pro plan.. not just an amateur(<-sp check!) free one..."

"You start Googling for some services..."

Perhaps you could cut some out like so:

"You realise that you need a pro web hosting service to host your super cool site..."

Also, consider spacing the lines out more. Compare the screen that starts "You are really in a hurry to choose one..." vs the screen that starts "But then..."