Show HN: Simon.Says.do – easy way to dispatch tasks to 1 to many
simon.says.do
simon.says.do
Few suggestions:
- As Jeff pointed out, it wasn't immediately clear what this did. After playing around with it I got it, but stating it in plain words on the homepage would likely help your conversions.
- Similarly the "Apply for a subdomain now!" heading would be better suited being used to tout the benefit to the customer. Meaning, your visitors don't care about applying for a subdomain. They care about collaboratively completing a task (maybe) so gear your headlines and copy towards that.
- It wasn't clear that the logo leads you to a demo -- I had to read it here that that was the case.
- When I hover over the "enter a task" field in the demo my cursor turns into a circle with a line through it and I can't click. I'm not sure if that's intentional because the functionality isn't there yet or a bug with the implementation in my browser.
I signed up and am looking to seeing where this goes.
Congrats on launching!
Or even what it does.
You should also link to the PDF that explains a little more: http://simon.says.do/assets/documents/simonsays.pdf
Explaining why it exists, how it works and what it does; the problem, the solution.
The WHY is missing - WHY do you offer it? Why does it exist? - WHY should I care? - WHY should I be a part of what you do? - WHY do I need it?
Related: "Start With Why" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qp0HIF3SfI4
Besides that I wish your project all the best. It looks very interesting!
"Curious? Check out our demo to learn more" http://demo.says.do/