Not at all! That is my drafting method creeping through. I try to write each sentence as a separate paragraph first to make sure I don’t get too wed to a paragraph and can delete/move liberally. Then I try to go and merge the paragraphs that have cohesion. Seems like I didn’t do a great job here. Sorry it distracted you, but honestly thanks for giving it a chance and the feedback. Will do a better job on the next one.