Sure. The critique is with his incoherently labeled images, not his prose or passion project.

If LLMs can't produce readable technical diagrams ("Figure n"), avoid them for diagramming.

Don't insult the reader with strings like Oarity, Ed3e Csess, Ouclstnoc, relinemen, ressore Critieal, Foll Throughput, Witnese/Refin, ecstate ta Mayor, and Hsoide Fulures Stafey Fen.

https://miro.medium.com/v2/resize:fit:1400/format:webp/1*X3z...

https://miro.medium.com/v2/resize:fit:1400/format:webp/1*7Cr...

https://miro.medium.com/v2/resize:fit:1400/format:webp/1*blw...