For me, it reads as not having any soul to it, as well as changing who its target reader is throughout the post. The choice of emphasis comes across weirdly too.
I think this is a wonderful tool, but whether it’s because the author uses AI to help them write this post, or that there’s AI edited content everywhere now, I’m weary of reading and trusting something that reads like this post does.
I don’t know if this is overblown or meta-commentary on the state of online posts these days, but it’s how I’m feeling, more and more, when I see online writings.