You should go read it and see if you can tell me a way I could improve it. I felt I gave actionable advice, but I’m always happy to know if I could have said things better.
Then you undercut the advice by adding "I've always wondered if <confident suggestion> would work", making it unclear how much of the advice is a shot in the dark and how much you've actually seen results from that advice.
Claims like "you might even one shot it" also make it seem like simple hype and not the war story of someone who's actually taken the advice.
But you know, people are down voting me for engaging with your question as well so I don't know. Maybe it's all bots these days :p