Show HN: Helvetitee: Custom tee. No bullshit. (Our four-day startup)
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In all serious, I'd be tempted if this was sub ten quid but for £25 you can get so so so much more for your money, and if you're willing to pay that for a white t-shirt with a word on it you have far too much money.
A couple of suggestions:
1. The person/model used for the primary image/ordering system looks miserable. "Look, you can get your own custom shirt, but it isn't going to make you happy" doesn't exactly seem like the message you're trying to send here! A smile would go a really long way. Also, the cropping around the hair makes it look a little less professional. I'm not a designer, and I'm sure it is difficult to get something like that perfect, but I think it is worth the effort given how prominent the photo is.
2. The photos of the t-shirts themselves make the t-shirts look like they're low quality (specifically, really thin). I'm not a huge fan of white shirts in general, but I definitely don't want any t-shirt that I can actively see through. Sure, your "gallery" model may be attractive, but it doesn't look very professional (nor does it speak highly of your shirts) if you can see her bra through the product.
3. I feel like the "About, delivery & more" link should really link to the "About" section. I was a little confused when it jumped down the page and I was just staring at some random "suggestions" which, in my case, were not interesting. There's nothing wrong with the suggestions, I just don't think they should be more prominent than "About".
4. I'm on a 27" thunderbolt display, and the marketing material in your bottom tabs is taking up less than half of the bottom of my screen when I am scrolled down as far as I can go. That's not the worst thing in the world, but I would rather scroll down than just change the bottom 40% of my screen when I click "tabs".
5. I'd want more information about the product, the company, and possibly you before I order anything. If you're trying to sell quality, then a full page talking about how damn awesome your shirts are would go a long way to converting me to a customer. And after you sold me on the product itself, I still wouldn't feel safe ordering anything from an unestablished company with no business address, almost no information about the people behind it, and no contact means other than email/twitter.
All in all though, it is cool to see what you can accomplish in only four days. Best of luck.
I actually agree with every point you raise. We've got a great deal to improve upon but like you say at the end, it has only been a quick project thus far.
I hope you'll take a look back (or follow one of us on twitter - @tomcavill / @helvetitee / @ccharlesworth) so you can see the site improve over the next few weeks.
Thanks again for taking the time to comment.
We have an API that you can use to maximize profit over time. You send us order information, we build a pricing model, then you make calls out to the model to either update it with a new order or get a price.
For more info (we actually use tshirts as an example): https://ventata.com/Ecommerce/Home && https://github.com/Ventata/API
Send me an email and I'll give you an API key.
(Don't go through my normal site, you'll have to pay that way)
A cute idea that might help people to spread their shirts: If someone creates a shirt (let's say I'm miley cyrus and I make one for my fans, "I <3 @mileycyrus") and it gets x (5?) sales they get a free copy of the t-shirt. That would give users an incentive to share their creation with their Facebook friends and Twitter followers.
The way you described the t-shirts makes them sound quite appealing so I figure I'll order one, no idea what to put on it though... :( maybe "I just wanted a t-shirt".
oh also I assume "handmade in London" refers to the business; but with t-shirts it would read as if you're saying the t-shirts are handmade in London, which isn't true.
I've changed the footer based on hearing this suggestion a couple of times :)
What value does your offering have in comparison to your competition?
Your point on the pricing is fair, it's something we'll have to monitor and find out what people are comfortable with.
Thanks for the feedback.
Just wanted to get the first version out there and pick up feedback.
No XXL sizes in a store for hackers?!?
Nice design, though!
Thanks re: design. Nice to hear.
You're sitting right at that point where a slight ease in price is going to result in a significant increase in quantity sold. Unless your production capacity is constrained or you're already very near your break-even point on cost/price, charge less and sell more.
Suggestion: Why not lower your profit margin a little bit (you have to be making at least $30+ USD on each order right now) to make it more affordable? I just imagine this could probably go much more viral at a more affordable price.
We're probably going to put it up to $30 after the opening two weeks, so consider this an 'early adopter' discount...
Here's a humble suggestion for fellow HNers: http://helevetitee.com/tee/Founder
BUT 25 British Pounds for a tshirt basically makes you ridiculously expensive to any American. Why would I pay $40 for a t-shirt ever? It doesn't matter how "hacker cool" it is :)
If you localized, you would significantly improve your prospects in the US.
How about something like this: http://images.asos.com/inv/media/9/3/6/7/2477639/greymarl/im...
Taken from here: http://www.asos.com/ASOS/ASOS-V-Neck-T-Shirt/Prod/pgeproduct...
If they can sell them for 6 quid, surely you could pick up something similar for just a few pounds.
Btw, how do you plan to do marketing on this? (Besides posting it on Hacker News - which probably brought you a ton of traffic already)
We're going to try and utilise the fact you can 'create' a tshirt with just a link, i.e. http://helvetitee.com/tee/foo-bar. It's so quick to react to trends and happenings, or suggest a tee to someone based on their actions, that we feel the product can benefit from virality and p2p sharing. Plus a healthy mix of the usual Google ads etc.
Your model looks very negative in expression. Also you have some left-over glow around the head.
Tees are light enough that whether I order 1 or 3 any increase in weight (and thus shipping costs) will be nominal.
Thanks re: bootstrap.
It's very memorable.
I can have a custom Gildan shirt for $16: