When I work on Modernism or any of the other experimental pages on https://startr.style I don't do it with any pretension but out of a love and familiarity of code and what the web can be. As child I traded helping out at a local computer store for time exploring Gopher and then Mosaic's window to the web.
I think what gets me is there's 6 paragraphs in a row that either start with "Modernism" or have it in the first sentence, and it comes along with words like "transcends", "echoes", "essence", "exude", "crafts." They're good paragraphs by themselves and make good points, I just think that together they come out a little breathless, and maybe some consolidation is in order :)
I notice from your profile that you haven't submitted your site to HN, I think you should do so, I think it would generate some interesting discussion.
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