Lack of intent is what makes reading LLM-generated text exhausting
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LLM is great at generating that sort of thing. When you lose concentration, or didn't want to pay attention, that document can be generated by LLM to fool you.
That's a lot of documents. All the powerpoints that young investment bankers and strategy consultants make. Every restaurant menu. Brochures. The middle 100 pages of a pop science book from the airport.
When it comes to writing something actually importantant, LLM can only help you a little bit. Well, it's a lot in historical context. But it can do things like bullet point ideas so you don't forget things, or move a few things around while preserving grammatical structure.
All it can do is bring you the ingredients. That's why we get these odd AI-generated articles nowadays, it's a bunch of chopped onions and tomatoes, very nicely done up but with no intention other than to trick you into thinking it's a meal.
The author orders some Curious George stickers and gets a surprising array of kind of scary "closely related" stickers with em.... a fuzzy interpreter. The plus c when you integrate. Those missing harmonics and back-channel data that get inaudibly cut out of MP3s. The goo between the prickles. We don't know how to say what it is, but we sure can tell when it's missing!
come again?
Humans use surprise (= prediction failure) as a learning signal and to focus our attention, so not surprising that we dose off and lose interest when something is highly predictable.
Good human authors know how to introduce plot twists and suspense, to keep the reader engaged and guessing. Imagine an entire novel that was instead written by an LLM, where the only plot twists are the predictable ones it copied from it's training material. The same goes for any LLM generated prose, whether advertising copy or training manual - it's going to be a snooze fest because it's so predictable - very low signal to noise ratio.
There are now multiple levels of RL being used to post-train these models, from RLHF (use RL to bias the model to generate outputs matching human feedback preferences) to RL used to improve reasoning by generating reasoning steps that lead to verified correct conclusions (in areas like math and programming where correctness can be verified).
RLHF (not RL in general) may lead to longer more verbose outputs to the extent that human testers indicated longer responses as their preference. Maybe testers are easily bullshitted and like something that is longer and sounds like a more comprehensive authoritative answer ?
There is also the fact that an LLM is, unless prompted otherwise, is trying to predict Mr. Average (entire training set), who is more likely to waffle on than an expert who will cut to the chase and just give the facts, which they have a firm grip of. You can of course prompt the model to behave like an expert, or any given role, or to be more concise, which may or may not result in better output. It's a bit like asking the model to summarize when it's not really summarizing but instead predicting what a summary would look like (form vs function).
That's btw a perfect analogy what ADHD is when consuming anything, anytime.
In my own usage, that has meant that even when I use LLMs to help with prose, I write the text and use the LLM to review and provide feedback. In some cases I will copy a sentence if the LLM version is better but generally I just ask for opinions. I explicitly request the AI _not_ to write. When it re-writes entire paragraphs of my prose I actually experience a deep cringe feeling.
Early in my career I really appreciated very DRY code with minimal repetition. However over time I’ve noticed that such code tends to introduce more abstractions as opposed to more verbose code which can often rely on fewer abstractions. I think this is good because I think we also have a sort of “abstraction budget” we have to stay within or our brains, metaphorically, stop reading from memory and need to start reading from disk (consulting docs, jumping to function definitions, etc…)
I feel the ideal code base would rely on a small number of powerful abstractions.
In practice I think this usually means relying mostly on the abstractions built into the language, standard library, and framework used and then maybe sprinkling in a couple of app/domain specific abstractions or powerful libraries that being their own abstraction.
So in my experience reducing boilerplate can often make the code more difficult to understand.
There’s a huge pile of abstractions in that codebase that you have internalized to the point of invisibility — machine instructions, virtual memory, ASCII, sequential execution, named variables, garbage collection, network streams…literally thousands of these abstractions had to be invented and become second nature to you so these other abstractions that currently aren’t as familiar could be based on them.
A good abstraction gives a return on investment of effort internalizing it. There’s no limit on how many good abstractions you should have.
Like way more than the rule of 3. Even a dozen uses (if it’s only going to be local to just that particular project) is not enough for me.
Edit: and maybe this just says more about the kinda of languages I use at work, but I feel the conventional, widely understood, idiomatic way to do lots of things is often heavy on boilerplate. If these languages were rewritten from the ground up I imagine with hindsight the core languages and standard libraries would look pretty different and be more ergonomic.
-> (GPT 4.5 "rewrite like a good editor")
Writing with an LLM can be viewed as translating human intent—expressed via a prompt—into a written document. The longer and more detailed the prompt, the closer the resulting document aligns with the original intent. Shorter prompts, indicating lower clarity or precision, compel the LLM to rely on general knowledge or common sense to fill in content, often resulting in fluff. On the other hand, excessively detailed prompts become nearly equivalent to writing the document yourself. Optimal productivity with LLMs occurs somewhere between these two extremes.
A recent win for me has been to use LLMs for finding references. I’ll write a paragraph about one of those “everyone knows this” concepts or a “I’ve seen this be true dozens of times IRL”. But it could use a citation.
So you go “Hey LLM, find me papers that support or refute this claim <paragraph>”. And it does. With links. It’s wonderful. Unlike Google there’s no recency bias, I’ve found original source blogs from 2005 (since requoted lots in SEO spam), papers about software engineering truths from the 1960’s (requoted ad nauseam by SEO spam), and sometimes even “Here are 2 papers that say you’re right and 3 papers that say you’re not”. Then I get to dig in and figure out who’s right.
Easily 10x faster than doing the research myself.
I’m using chatgpt so whatever they’re doing is working
The author last name was correct, but the year cited should read "2004" instead. Turns out the Smith listed in the bibliography wasn't the smith that invented the 2004 metric from computer science for which he was cited, but another Smith with the same last name from the field of medicine, who wrote a very unrelated paper in 1971 that was referred to. I made the author aware (not mentioning any suspicions of potential LLM involvement...) by email and got told I wasn't the first one to point that out.
Papers like that are now creeping into journals, conference proceedings and online archives, mostly unchecked/unnoticed, which waters down the quality a lot.
PS: cited author's name changed.
This AI interlocutor is like a permanent cataract. It always makes it harder to see, never easier.
Often I use LLMs to "have a conversation with a language" such as researching the cognate between the phrase "woo" to describe the supernatural in English and the similarly pronounced character 巫 (wu) in Chinese which is used in words like 女巫 (witch -- that first character means "woman") but it is not the "wu" in 武侠 (wǔxiá -- martial arts)
I am sure one of these days I am going to embarrass myself but with partial comprehension I could do that without the help of an LLM.
and if you aren’t proofreading, shame on you
LLMs are best at using words and phrases that “flow well”. Sometimes they write nonsense that flows well (even the summaries have to be checked because sometimes the meaning is different), but sometimes they find better words and phrases that I couldn’t find myself.
They’re especially good if you have almost stream-of-consciousness writing and can’t bother to rephrase it yourself, e.g. you’re writing a boring technical report. Even for something where quality is important, like an epic story: you can write a very rough draft, revise with an LLM, then revise manually.
This attitude provides a clue as to 1) the ways we're using LLMs now that will soon seem absurd (an LLM should never make writing longer, only shorter) and 2) the ways LLMs will be used after the novelty wears off, like interpreting loosely specified requests into computable programs and distilling overly long writing to maximize relevance.
yuck, if you ask me to read something without disclosing it’s AI and it’s a just bad I will be mad. Especially if it’s a long thing and I HAVE to read it (like for work)
piss off wasting people’s time with that shit
I have so many bundled-up ideas for content in my head, but I can never find time to get them out. In addition, I hate wasting time on building tables, formatting text, etc. There's a reason that a lot of busy CEOs don't hand-write blog posts, but will go on podcasts, video, and conferences, and spend hours there. The reason is that the communication speed is much faster talking and being interviewed. All that to say is that via a combination of transcription and AI-powered formatting, that's an area where LLMs can really help.
I do think LLMs + search is more helpful than a Google Search. Clicking through all the links for you and bundling it together is a much better experience and truthfully it finds and surfaces ideas and content that a normal search just doesn't, or it takes the user going to the 4th page to get there.
Third, entertainment. We often find ourselves deep in a doomscroll looking at images and video - on Instagram, TikTok, whatever. If AI can produce entertaining imagery and video for the pure goal of decompressing and relaxing after a long day out at the oil fields or as a janitor at the elderly care home, then there's value there. Sure it may not be beautiful art like an Oscar-winning film, but is it worse than reality TV? Even better is those who enjoy the creativity of seeing images from their mind produced vividly via something like Midjourney.
So all that being said, that's where I'm seeing the value.
But I totally agree with the author - if I have a team member that puts work in front of me that's supposed to be well done, and it's obviusly GPT-generated, that's an issue - unless we agreed on it.
The point of doing good work a lot of times means doing something new and creative. If it's AI-generated, there still has to be the human touch. I could go on - we all have perspectives here - but I'll stop there!
the courses i had to grade in were often undergrad students first exposure to having to read scientific papers. when it came time to write an essay of their own, they always felt a need to mimic the writing style of those papers and it resulted in lots of superficial changes to their writing that made it clear that they read the papers but did not understand the papers. they'd sprinkle in words like "putative" and "substrate" in places that felt correct but made no sense.
i wish that they would've had the confidence to just write what they wanted to say instead of putting on airs and making some convoluted and sometimes nonsensical prose.
LLMs do the same thing.
Judging by discussions I've had around this topic, a lot of people don't seem to mind reading LLM edited or straight-up generated content as long as they feel like they gain value out of it. To me, it feels like a violation of a social contract. Communication isn't just words; the words are there to help you interpret the implicit meaning of the author. When there is no author, that meaning doesn't exist and I think that's part of why it's so repulsive to decipher LLM output.
If the goal is boilerplate code, or a fuzzy view of documentation from the corpus, or "pretty" images to gawp at in private, that's fine and dandy, because you're just extracting and viewing the model data on your own time.
If you're "proofreading" an already-1kB letter for style / formality that's fine, since your input intents are high-fidelity and you're essentially referencing a style guide for some minor edits.
But low-input generations are entirely inappropriate for crafting a message to other humans, because the result is 99% shoving the model in their face. Whether it's letters, pull requests, graphical art, or music - it's all communication, and low-input AI generations are just spam in that context, semantically equivalent to sending them the prompt instead of the output. And people can tell, because we're excellent pattern-matchers, and every bit of information/intent abdicated to the model will inevitably leave its mark on the output.
If anyone has a better title (i.e. more accurate and neutral, preferably using representative language from the article), we can change it again.
At work I’m not trying to connect with people on any more level than just being on the same level as to what we are working on. Maybe on break but while deep-working I just want the information necessary to do the job, the communication being there to communicate the information, efficiently.
If you outsource your sending of communication to SlopBot and I outsource my reading of said communication to another SlopBot to summarize or whatbeit we are adding so much noise it’s just more fucking work.
It’s not the same as pornography, I think it’s an odd thing to compare it to. Yes you _can_ replace “human connection” with pornography but this is human connection that is not required for things like your job ((i hope, haha)). You need to communicate information and people outsourcing their writing to LLMs is just adding extra fuzz for the people having to work with said information.
It’s a nice blogpost, the pornography comparison is just out of place.
The problem is that we are slowly be pushed to become cogs who only really think this way. We shouldn't just want to be the most efficient possible. Technology already reduces the ability for us to connect, which is why connections at work seem weird or shallow in the first place. We simply don't need each other as much, so it makes sense that AI seems like the next logical step.
Your sentiments are just your instinctual desire to move to the next local maximum in a sequence of descending maxima that lead to the bottom.
It’s like being given food and later you find out it was made from human corpses. “If you couldn’t tell then there was no problem” doesn’t fly.
I think a lot of the discourse just shows we're still in the early days for adoption and maturity of this tech. (Not to blame the discourse, I think it's a reflection of the state of the tools and industry.)
Eventually, likely at least a couple years from now, more people will have better technical literacy when it comes to LLMs. And it will become less and less acceptable to put out slop with them in most professional settings. I just think human disgust is too strong of an emotion to acclimate to the laziest of LLM outputs.
I mean I think it's already happening before our eyes. I've been pleasantly surprised by how many more people I see talking in much more detail about the unique qualities of LLM outputs. And slowly, but surely the discourse is becoming less about moral panic and more just about questioning their use. Which has to happen for us all to collectively (and individually) figure out where and what is the place for LLMs in our personal and professional lives.
Unfortunately this doesn't hold up in the real world, where managers dictate which tools are used, and directors dictate which are even going to be purchased for use. Sometimes the gap can't be bridged, but the onus is certainly not on the employee to bridge it.
but believe that every such critique points the way to improved AI.
It's pretty easy to imagine any number of ways of incorporating this concern directly, especially in any reasoning chain approach.
Personally I'd be fond of an eventual Society of Minds where the text put out for non-chatty reasons,
represents the collaborative adversarial relationship between various roles, each itself reflexive, including an "editor" and a "product manager," who force intent and clarity... maybe through iteration...
What‽ That in no way can solve the problem of human intent. I think you missed the point entirely.
I'm really just using the LLM as a sounding board. Sometimes i'll replace a sentence using the feedback, less frequently I might replace a whole paragraph, but mostly I just use the feedback to manually tweak what I wrote.
I agree with that, but they are getting better all the time.
In any case, we are not literally replacing humans. We just shuffle jobs around: when a machine does a job that a human used to do, the human isn't replaced; the human is still there and could do something else with their life.
The fact that texts by LLMs cannot be the result of true intent is another question. When reading a text, we are only guessing at its intent.
A friend said about AI-generated music: "AI can never be creative so the music will never be creative". I think that is a mistake. Like intent, creativity is not something intrinsic in the text/music, but a part of the consumers interpretation.
Music and creativity is an entirely separate matter. I don't think LLMs can be truly creative because they're just mixing existing ideas from their training set. Which is also what humans do 99% of the time, but I like to believe that once in awhile humans have a truly original idea. This one is a bit harder to prove though.
Music is almost entirely unoriginal though. It's just sex, drugs, love, gangster BS. Basic primitive human stuff. AI should have no problem with that.
My argument is that using a machine to replace your thinking, your voice, or your relationships is a very bad thing. Humans have intrinsic worth—machines do not.
I agree with that, and the only logical path if we are to preserve this principle is to eradicate AI, and not try and control it. There is no way to control it (think prisoner's dilemma, greedy individuals, etc.)
Read a book.
In the very same way as a deal with Darth Vader, I presume.
Has the author been in any factory or seen what it looks like in many factories? Robots everywhere!
Is the author a manual laborer? If not, why? Because humans evented machines!
It will be very, very tempting for companies to let people go when LLMs can do everything that they envision the people doing. It is very hard to resist the cost savings that LLMs have over people. People who get sick, get married, go on vacation, have children, and sometimes just need a break, so they don't come in. LLMs always come in. LLMs always work.
Many executives see LLMs as the ideal replacement for humans in information roles. That is clearly batshit insane but the numbers really lean towards this if you're someone who is distant from people who work for you.
Companies would do well not to forget that companies are of people, by people, and for people. they exist solely to provide products or services to people, be it actual individuals or companies which are made up of people.
If companies ditch too many people in favor of automation, they'll find fewer customers for their goods. because people won't be able to afford them, or will have no need for them. it's not like there's some huge need for LLM trainers to take up the unemployment slack. There is no replacement industry this time.
What we're seeing is exactly what you'd expect if the AI hype were, from capital's perspective, just another NFT-style grift.
I'm not sure how you view the world in 10 years, and I would really like to know more about what you're meaning here, and I agree that things will be bonkers in 10 years, for one reason or another, if the pace of AI progress continues.
Author here. I think it is well and good to replace human jobs with automation thereby freeing them up for more creative activities. My favorite appliances are my dish washer, washing machine, dryer, and now my robot vacuum. I think automation is great!
I see the problem when humans allow machines to start replacing what is intrinsically human: when you offload your creativity onto a machine, when you "communicate" via LLMs, or when you try to assuage loneliness with a computer "friend", you're missing out on vital parts of the human experience.
There is a balance in both the mental and physical domains. Those who have a high intellectual capacity will probably think otherwise because intellectual activities is what THEY like to do. But the truth is, some people enjoy manual labor and it's not good to completely replace them either because there is art in manual work as well.
For physical labor it might make sense, but for mental labor it does not.
Many of those skills are obsolete when using a forklift.
I think that's a better mental model for how to implement AI in a way that drastically reduces the likelihood of causing harm or reducing quality.
Unfortunately, most AI solutions, products, implementations, etc. are just defaulting to trying to completely automate and obviate the human element. I think many companies are going to be in for a rude surprise when going that route (e.g. Klarna).
remind me of certain outsourced devs with worked with before. like a horse with blinkers
i think shift from analog to digital was from authentic (flawed) to the hyper-real (reality)
and now we are entering the hyper-surreal (clown world)
Speaking of inanity. This sentiment, if taken seriously (I doubt people take this author seriously very often) would imply the majority of humanity should be spending a large amount of their life digging holes in the ground with their bare hands to drop a couple seeds in. Replacing them with some god awful machine, like a plow pulled by a tractor, means they must be worthless. They should never watch a movie, only the play. They should never listen to Spotify, they should have to wait for a band to play near them.
Periodic famine every 5-10 years would kill 20% or more of the population. 40% to 60% of skeletons from that period show chronic malnutrition. Humanity survived because when a region would starve out it would be back-filled by populations from neighboring regions. Despite women having a baby every other year on average, populations only increased very slowly and inconsistently.
Could you explain how it's better?
So why not wrap it up now? If there's no value in not dying of starvation.
Don't forget that science is separate, we are driven to innovate and invent as human beings, people spend their entire lives working on niche hyper specific math problems, collectively that leads to innovation and practical purposes like automation. Most scientists aren't in it for the money, we would have scientists even if there were no neoliberals. Capitalism is a separate driving force from science, there is nothing inherent about innovation and knowledge that is bad, its capitalism with its sole purpose to seek profit maximization at all cost and despite any and all negative consequences is what is hurting us.
Which was awfully prescient in 2008: https://archive.org/details/anathem0000step/page/794/mode/2u...
They began to put crap on the Reticulum deliberately, forcing people to use their products to filter that crap back out. They created syndevs whose sole purpose was to spew crap into the Reticulum.
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Disagree with that, because firstly, they have not really solved any problems that outweight the negatives that they have unleashed and will unleash on society.
So they make programmers more effective: is that actually a good thing, though? Fact is, most software is designed to make consumerism and corporations more effective, and that's not really a good thing for the long-term health of the planet.
Your article also indicates a sort of independence between keeping intellectual tasks primarily human and allowing AI/LLMs to work in specific domains. However, those with the power don't care about principles. They just want to replace as much as they can and use the human instinct to get ahead quickly to do so. And no amount of priniciple will stop them. AI is just too powerful to be used in a way that is consistent with human beings keeping their intellectual environment healthy.
And I disagree with that. They are marvels of engineering and they have solved thorny problems. Just because they problems they've solved in the very short time they've been solving problems don't yet outweigh the negatives, doesn't mean they won't soon, and doesn't make either statement false.
Great things take time, and great omelets are made from broken eggs. Nothing new under the sun, except AI.
Like what then? Let's hear some examples.
> AI, primarily through generative AI models, has dramatically changed our approach by accelerating the design process significantly. These models can predict material properties from extensive datasets, enabling rapid prototyping and evaluation that used to take years. We can now iterate designs quickly, focusing on the most promising materials early in the development phase, enhancing both efficiency and creativity in materials science. This is a huge leap forward because it reduces the time and cost associated with traditional materials development, allowing for more experimentation and innovation.
> One notable application is using deep learning models to infer the internal properties of materials from surface data. This technology is groundbreaking, particularly for industries like aerospace and biomedical, where non-destructive testing is crucial. These models can predict internal flaws or stresses by analyzing external properties without physically altering the material. This capability is essential for maintaining the integrity of critical structures and devices, making materials safer and more reliable while saving time and resources. Other recent advances are in multimodal AI, where such models can design materials and understand and generate multiple input and output types, such as text, images, chemical formulas, microstructural designs, and much more.
https://professional.mit.edu/news/articles/revolutionizing-m...
There's lots of other examples.
New ways to create COVID vaccines: https://www.nature.com/articles/s41586-025-09442-9
More effective than humans at reading medical scans: https://www.weforum.org/stories/2025/03/ai-transforming-glob...
AI is already intensely useful, and will only continue to improve.
Drawing distinctions between LLMs and other kinds of ML and AI is not particularly interesting: it's all machines using pattern recognition to automate things that previously took thought.
To me, all of those positives are dwarfed by negatives.
Extremely Bullish.
> At work I was sent a long design document and asked for my thoughts on it. As I read, I had a really hard time following it. Eventually I guessed correctly
> Parts of it sounded like a decent design document, but there was just way too much fluff that served only to confuse me.
> Intent is the core thing: the lack of intent is what makes reading AI-slop so revolting. There needs to be a human intent—human will and human care—behind everything that is demanded of our care and attention.
I am reminded of the "writing lesson" scene in "A River Runs Through it", pretty obviously reflecting the author's education as a writer.[0]
> Norman is at his desk hard at work writing a paper which he then turns into his father for review. His father marks it up with a red pen and simply says, “Half as long.”
> Norman goes back to work, cuts the length of the paper in half and turns it in for further review. His father marks it up once more and says, “Again, half as long.”
> Following a final round of edits, his father looks over the finished product and says, “Good, now throw it away.”
Well, we don't throw away polished work on the job. The scene is about education. LLM's are uneducated in communicating to readers, compared to skilled writers, and technical writing, especially, is not like summer reading, where nothing really matters but some vague plot line and lots of juicy words.
Key lesson:
> (1) Brevity is important. Looking back on it now it’s ridiculous how many teachers forced me and my fellow classmates to write papers a certain page length when I was in school. The goal should be to make your point using as many or few words as are necessary. I love this quote from the scene: “He taught nothing but reading and writing. And being a Scot…believed that the art of writing lay in thrift.” People are busy, or at the very least claim to be, so get to the point in whatever you’re writing.
That last sentence is important.
A document is meant to be read by a human. Brevity and focus are important, and oh yes, accuracy. We now have additional burdens of dealing with long, rambling texts, finding relevant/key points in it, and worrying if it is full of, well, garbage.
Three strikes before you get in the batter's box.
[0] https://awealthofcommonsense.com/2019/07/writing-lessons-fro...
did the author oversleep the past several centuries?
as for the rest of it, the current crop of LLMs are bad at writing because of ~~brainwashing~~ alignment and the vast amount of ESL-written assistant exchanges being heavily prioritized during training. when you interact with a corporate model via its default chat interface, without a jailbreak and a generous prefill, you interact with the equivalent of a HR lady who takes her DEI training super seriously. the Chinese models train heavily on the slop produced by GPT/Claude/Gemini, so they exhibit similar behavior. it was particularly noticeable with original llama, whose base models were much more human compared to the finetunes, which were heavily tainted with GPT slop.
I guess what I'm trying to say is that LLMs are not inherently incapable of writing well. a model trained only on high-quality human data and without safety/alignment brainwash will be far, far more capable than the current ones.
did you? this is one of the central points argued by luddites since the industrial revolution began.
> I guess what I'm trying to say is that LLMs are not inherently incapable of writing well.
i don't know if that's quite the argument the author is making; more that LLMs are inherently incapable of producing content of value (subjective, but I tend to agree).
the adage i've heard that i like quite a bit is "if it's not worth writing, it's not worth reading".
The lesson of the past several centuries is that automation enables humans to do other, more interesting tasks.
Unemployment would trend to 100% and work hours would trend to 0 but it's just not the case.
I see the problem when humans allow machines to start replacing what is intrinsically human: when you offload your creativity onto a machine, when you "communicate" via LLMs, or when you try to assuage loneliness with a computer "friend", you're missing out on vital parts of the human experience.
I think a machine might be able to help you come up with a philosophical perspective that doesn't just cast yourself at the pinnacle of human worth.
The post is about what do we lose when we no longer have human intent behind interpersonal communication.
Nowhere did OP specifically say what labor they were for or against partial or full automation. That's a different conversation that it seems you really want to have.