I think the fact that the police officer was so involved with updating the writer is what stood out to me. It is rare that we see/hear a detailed explanation of what police work entails and unless we ourselves are the one they are speaking with it might never happen.

When I saw the title, I wondered how getting your laptop stolen could get you busted for drugs.

I can only suppose that, while I don't expect the average cop is a jerk, I did reflexively expect the average cop story to feature one.