Ask HN: Requesting Feedback and Ideas on something I wrote

labs.doshare.me

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First off: have someone do proofreading & corrections. Spelling errors, punctuation, too long sentences all over the place.

> We're asking for you to pick your phone up to download this app

What app? Link? App does what? And it's "pick up your phone".

> or below this post in comment section

Comment section where? I'm not seeing "comment" button or anything.

(Mobile adjusts screen brightness to ambient lighting)

Just turn it off then; check device's setting.

Not sure what the idea is here. Are you planning to develop an entire new UI? That's a big project! For which devices? Apple != Android != Linux != most desktop PCs/laptops etc.

Interesting/interesting UIs have been done 101 times already (and some ready-to-install on device X, Y or Z). Things wrong with Google apps etc? You can't fix that other than by reporting/asking Google, Microsoft & co. They're web apps! Not open source apps you can download & tinker with.

To summarize: unclear what exactly is being proposed here. Please clarify?

(and the whole thing reads like AI-generated, fwiw)

Thanks a lot for the honest feedback, I wrote this piece few months ago, and didn't get the time to build links and setup a framework for the website.

Feedback on the copy, and your inputs are greatly appreciated, I'll try to make the piece more gentle and human as possible, first.

I am a bit confused by the issues and the solution.

Is there any plan? Is there any genuine problems? Like, you can simply change the setting to stop the auto changing of the brightness?

Also a lot of typos.

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