> "Glamorous Toolkit is the Moldable Development Environment"
So it's some sort of an IDE? What does moldable mean?
> "Make systems explainable through contextual micro tools"
What is a "system" in the context of an IDE? "Contextual micro tools" also sounds completely abstract.
> "Each problem about your system is special. And each problem can be explained through contextual development experiences. Glamorous Toolkit enables you to build such experiences out of micro tools. Thousands of them ... per system. It's called Moldable Development."
... this does not help at all. Just more words without meaning.
Next, there's the video. For somebody with zero context so far, why would they sit through a 46 min low quality video?
tudorgirba - if this is your project, you really need to focus on getting the top half of the page right. People won't watch your video, no one will read your book if you can't give them a hook they understand.
Use words and phrases with concrete and well understood meaning with adjectives:
* Don't say "micro tool". Like Posix utilities? What is a tool? What makes it micro?
* Don't say "contextual development". Isn't all development contextual?
* "moldable" - no one knows what this means, don't force them to try and figure it out.
* Don't say "system", it is too abstract.
For example, "Glamorous Toolkit is an IDE for literate programming with first class support for interactive visualizations". If you can't get that sentence right, people just won't invest in learning more about your platform.