Wow... That was a lot of text without much depth to it.
[Edit] To make my criticism more precise: The text mostly rephrases it's central point a few times and presents these rephrasings as arguments.
[Edit] To make my criticism more precise: The text mostly rephrases it's central point a few times and presents these rephrasings as arguments.
If you can prove a theorem without any of that, that's a little boring theorem to prove.