Yes, David Chalmers.
For the article itself, phrases like "a naïve and toxic view" and "a debased version of what we are" are statements that need to be strongly backed up.
"For me, thinking is a specific and rather unique set of experiences we have." yes, okay, but what experiences?
What do you mean by "concepts"?
She talks about behaviorist reactions, but fails to back that up at all. Why does she think e.g. mechanistic interp. is behaviorist?
"there’s nothing on the other side participating in this communication." I think this is currently correct, for some definition of "nothing", but give an argument.
"new moral claims in the world" give a good physics-based account of this process in humans.
But this efficiency, Vallor continues, “is never defined with any reference to any higher value, which always slays me. Because I could be the most efficient at burning down every house on the planet, and no one would say, ‘Yay Shannon, you are the most efficient pyromaniac we have ever seen! Good on you!’” -- ever heard of E/ACC?
"Vallor tells me she once tried to explain to an AGI leader that there’s no mathematical solution to the problem of justice." -- not currently, but this is peak woolly. Maybe she doesn't know it, but a mathematical solution would need to contain incredibly horrible things. If you stay away from the math, you can avoid thinking about that sort of thing.
Mainly though, it's what the article does not contain. That's tricky to enumerate. I can try if you want.