Pitch Deck Roasters?

Looking for someone who will review / roast my pitch deck. Ideally you're someone who viewed 10s of decks before. Anyone up to it? You can leave comments directly on the doc.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n2xqHjvtMX4v34He0Gw1Qy0GH-MgIRmH/view?usp=sharing