Simple general rule of digital marketing: No one reads website copy. They look at pictures and scan headings.
Another simple rule: I inherently don’t care about your product if I’m reading your site for the first time, so don’t spend time describing your capabilities. Simply describe how my life will be better if I use your product, and show me the product doing those things.
Less words more pictures. Less words more value.
(Sorry for being blunt, just trying to help with your conversions)