Ask HN: Critique my copywriting

I just finished working on a landing page for my main project, Folyo.

To give you some background, Folyo helps startups find great, vetted freelance designers. I've got about 400 designers signed up so far. Here's the landing page:

http://folyo.me/learn-more

Would love to get feedback on the copywriting, design, or anything else I could improve!