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That's the project of one of the authors (https://x.com/mjhcodes/status/1816156147428048941). How does "Our team jumped into action." apply when it's one's own project?
For $69 USD/month I'd expect 20 minutes of a seasoned senior SaaS professional's time. The page lists a dozens of tasks they can work on. Either they're massively underselling themselves or it's some kind of marketing ploy to find founders with underperforming products and later sell them something else (for example ask for shares of the company).
A pricing of $1000 USD/month for 10h/week or such would fit better. That might exclude those early SaaS project which don't have much revenue yet but I think $69 is too low to be believable.
The project originally joined Saastronomy when it was small, then after having grown was later acquired and built out further.
For the pricing, it is aimed at projects that are in the early stages of growth, which is what the team specialises in working with.
> We work alongside every step of the way to help you to push your SaaS to new levels.
The second thing is.
> By taking a growth-focused approach, we target your potential customers and acquire new revenue.
That's a lot of words that don't tell me anything about the service you provide. I'm already growth-focused, trying to maximize ROI, and pushing my SaaS to new levels. What exactly do you do?
Consider: "We offer a set of services tailored to the SaaS industry" sounds like marketing speak. How about "We know SaaS inside and out, from years (decades?) of experience at [SaaS company], [SaaS company], and working with dozens (?) of clients."
After I scroll a third of the way down, I finally see that you're marketing consultants. The bullet points under "About us" are the most interesting thing about the page, and you should lead with them. I know next to nothing about marketing, but "we will help optimize (increase? triple?) your conversion rates through a highly-personalized pricing and content strategy" reads a lot better than "grow your business, maximize ROI".
Finally, and I don't mean to sound harsh, but if you're doing marketing consulting, your own marketing page currently doesn't inspire much confidence.
It's a bit unclear, but such services can definitely be useful.