it has been rewritten using a LLM to have broadly the same meaning but at the same time having all the lines at the same lenght.
Legal text uses its own jargon because the specific meaning of specific words in contracts has been exhaustively argued in court, so any lawyer knows exactly what they mean, and very lengthy court cases on this can be avoided.
For an example, this license lacks the word "irrevocable". This is not a small oversight, and makes using anything provided under this license legally dangerous even if you agree with everything else in it.
No reasonable person would use this, but it is not a good idea to assume your audience on the internet consists exclusively of reasonable persons. Sometimes it's a good idea to spell out the obvious.
> IN NO EVENT UNLESS REQUIRED BY APPLICABLE LAW OR AGREED TO IN *WRING* WILL