I'm not sure I agree. If you believe something is destroying civil society, you're going to have a strong emotional reaction. That should come through when you write about it. Otherwise readers won't get the full impact of what you're trying to say.
Not sure how your response can be framed as 'Denying the antecedent'. :-/
Someone isn’t knowledgeable and responsible for every detail of every feature means they are responsible and knowledgeable for none
This clearly implies that sime blame is warranted.
But I will say the tone makes me stop short of sending this to my parents, who actually need to be swayed (whereas I don’t).
So if your goal is to be interesting and informative to people who are already on your side, you did well. That’s a worthy enough goal imo.