I find this essay to be well-crafted and compelling.
E.g. what this passage mean -
"...this single-use lander carries less payload (both up and down) than the tiny Lunar Module on Apollo 17."
? Can't Starship HLS lift more than 50 kg of rocks from the Moon?.. I'm intentionally simplifying the question.
Same with why each stay is going to have to be just ~1 week. Starship can obviously carry more than enough stuff for 2 people to live off for months. But Orion is only able to stay undocked for 21 days.
I do agree NASA's Artemis program is strange. However it's enmeshed with Starship, and that's sufficiently different story.
The other comments in this thread suggest what the author was getting at but it's not in the plain reading of the article.