Bioglass 45S5

Interesting material, but poorly written page. It has a breathless tone, and gives too much and too little detail at the same time.

Reads like it might be by a domain expert who has lost sight of what "regular" people know. Jargon is optimized for talking about specific things (Eskimos have 200 words for snow...). It's important to translate back into "regular words", which is jargon for normal life!

Something like

"Bioglass is a synthetic material that is <non-reactive?> inside the human body. It bonds to bone, and is used in surgery to <patch bones?>.

It was discovered by <xxx> in the 1950s, and is composed of..."