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Ask HN: I need headline suggestions please

2 pointsVishal191119993 comments

I am trying to build an innovative knowledge base application with AI at it's center.

The application can store all the docs, templates, "customer and project data (coming soon)" of a company and then the team can query the data, write emails, and do a lot more, wherever they are with a chrome extension. It's specially helpful for people like community manager, HR, sales, etc...

Earlier I ran an agency, it was very difficult to delegate a lot of tasks with reliability. This app can ease that.

But I feel that people are not able to understand this Idea properly as they are not booking call with the button on the website.

I am getting good traffic but no call bookings which is not what I expected

cheatsheet.to

Moreover, I have kept it's focus to people-facing teams, but not sure whether that is the best way to target that audience.

Can someone see my headline and help me write a better one?

Thanks a lot

It looks like maybe you could benefit from having the headline text be more concrete. The value may seem obvious to you, but it is a bit vague to me when I read the initial text and then skim down through the page.

Here are some example questions I have:

* Who are the communications from?

* Who are they writing to?

* Are the comms for technical support, general questions, or something else?

I may be wrong, but it sounds like you're focused on the how (the knowledge base and the AI). Perhaps it would get more demo contact traction if you tried some different landing pages which address very specific use cases and make the headlines much more specific.

Here's what I mean:

Imagine you're running ClassyComms.com. The first niche you're tackling is helping your support team write better, faster responses to their external customers.

So the headline is:

Write clear and helpful responses to your customers in way less time!

Anyway, you get the idea. For the sales copy, focus on the customer tasks, and less on the how. Good luck with your venture!

Your domain name is compelling but search does not align with it. I might be drawn to that domain hoping to get pre-made school cheatsheets such as a page of physics formulas or perhaps a page of instructions on how to save and quit from a vim session (jk I use vim all the time). Coming to product and finding it to be enterprise search would not align with my expectations.

Good luck with you products.

Perhaps something suggesting finding a needle in a haystack might work for you. Maybe something like "just needles" or "hay obliterater"

Needles in haystack, is a nice one , thanks for the suggestion.

I named is Cheatsheet, as you can quickly lookup your data where ever you are.

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