Nothing is more tedious that a po'd pedant. OP is a person who fell in love with the word "ergodic", and just both couldn't let it go; and even then uses it badly. If you want to say "unfair", or "inequitable", just say that. It's simpler and more honest and doesn't make you look like a jargon spouting smarty-pants. What on earth does "non-ergodic" even mean to a normal reader? Even after that, OP buries the lede. Put what you want to say in the first paragraph. Otherwise everyone is so bored by the time you get to it they just don't care. It's Twitter, not the New Yorker. Any New Yorker editor worth their salt would have reversed it. Apply or don't apply to YC, but don't base your decision on whether it's ergodic or not. Who on earth knows what that means?