Nice job on this. But, one has to be careful with redefining terms that have a generally accepted meaning. Changing Debit/Credit to Incoming/Outgoing smacks of jargon and will cause confusion. Any bookkeeper will understand what credit cash and debit expense means. Putting that in incoming and outgoing terms will not help the people who do the work, or have to explain the work. It's probably worth the effort of learning the nomenclature that's been useful for a few hundred years rather than falling back on what are metaphors.